good story so far

GREAT STORY! REALLY GREAT!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ADD MORE SOON! I LOVE THE STORY LINE! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT, WILL JESS EVER MAKE IT HOME, AND HOW WILL HE FIX THINGS! PLEASE ADD MORE SOON!

TOOTLES!

Wow, this is way too good to not continue with! I know it's been a long time since you started the fic, but it's never too late :)

hey...hi...i love this story...poor,poor,poor (or was it rich,rich,rich?)jesse! go on...
continue...i'm dying here 's e wat,three more chpters tt u promise hurry up already...come on...hopefully u'll find ur muse soon...i'm waiting...!excellent work!now get on wif it!

This story is so awesome, the magnitude of it must be almost overwhelming to write, but sure would like you to write more! Please (grovel, whine)? Are you the same Vega who wrote "Eventual" on the PureMX Board? If so, I loved that story too, it was awesome, should write a sequel (hint hint). Keep on writing! K

I absolutely love your story. It's very deep and emotional. I especially like the chapter about Jesse and his feelings for Shalimar. I can't wait to read Shalimar's point of view about all this. Update soon!

this is really good, phew! don't stop!

I'm pretty sure you've already heard this. but WOW. I'm loving this. The descriptions are clear and crisp, not overwhelming but enough to put me in the story, the present tense you're using is perfect for the story, and your characterisation is spot-on. On the other hand, there seems to be this disturbing trend towards cliffhangers. I really hope you update this one soon, or I might give myself an ulcer worrying ;)

Framling

I know I already reviewed this at Pure, but if reviews function as your aspirin then I should dump as much as I can in your direction then! Like I said, fantastic writing. I enjoyed the use of the creation myth as the overall metaphor that bound everything in this installment together. I also liked how you portrayed Jesse and the semi-J/S, its exactly how J/S should be portrayed, both in fanfiction and the show itself. Great job, and I can't wait for the rest. :)

I'm crying. I don't think I'll survive five of these. this is so good. Hell

M. I didn't expect to see a piece of your writing up here in this fandom. Heh. I abandoned it long ago, but just-I'm speechless. You are talented in so many different ways. You can write pain, reflection, and your skill for writing action is lovely and beautiful. You're such a versatile author, and I envy you.

This story is simply magnificant. I love the fragmented, non-linear style of storytelling. Not many people can really pull it off, but you can - you can in the most excellent fashion. I'll eagerly await the next installment. :)

And really, we need to talk soon. Heh. Did you get my email? Or is hotmail being awful? Technology has it's downfalls. Heh. :)

You know, I think this is better than the actual show. It's very interesting to be in Emma's head, she's sort of emerged as the most secretly powerful character. Excellent work.

This is so good I can't think of a word good enough to decribe it. I have never read anything as good as this, it is BRILLIANT. This is perfect on its own, the fact that there's more to come is wonderful. I love the way you come back to the same thought again and again, always in a slightly different way. I am sooooo jealous of your skill!

And now you think I'm a nutter. Never mind.

I know I've reviewed this already in the Pure boards, but I have to review it again. Beautiful fic, and I cannot wait for more, so speed up the aspirin, girl!

You have to let me archive this in Pure, all righty? ;)

Wow! This is really great. I can't wait to see the next part. Please update soon.