This was so super cute. You are a magnificent author. Thank you for your hard work and dedication to this cute couple’s story.

-BtFM

For this being your first sex scene, you did a great job. Heck, you wrote it better and more accurately than most smut I’ve read on here.

I will continue reading your story now. I am enjoying it so far. You have a firm grasp of how romance is supposed to be written - something I have been hard-pressed to find in Nygmobblepot stories thus far. I look forward to reading more from you.

-BtFM

I LOVE this story! I'm kinda upset there is only 8 chapters. Every thing works well together

Now if only all/any of this did happen in the TV show TT

This is the fucking best it is cute as shit and I love you ohmygod

Awwww this is so sweet!

Sorry for not leaving a more detailed review, but I wanted to drop you a line and tell you how adorable this is and wish you a very merry Christmas yourself! Ed and Os's gifts to each other are so super cute! And I love that they both just keep playing over the fact that they're engaged with happy delight. And snowball fights, of course! Nygmobblepot snowball fight - what a Christmas gift! So thank you!

Have a wonderful holiday, my friend!
Love from, AB

I'm so SO sorry I was not as prompt as I usually am with my reviews! Christmas prep has eaten by brain. Anyway:

*pumps fist* YES I WAS RIGHT! This is SOOO perfect. Absolutely fantastic. Oh my gosh. Yes. So cute and yet so perfectly in character for both of them. Ed's dialogue is perfect. And of course Oswald would burst into tears, bless him. :D

In fact, your writing of everyone is so fantastically in character. Particularly Harvey. Oh my God, best writing of Harvey I have ever seen in fanfiction. And Jim too! I ADORE that the two of them are literally sitting in the corner watching this all play out! OMG, that is my life! And Harvey being like "How can THEY get love and we can't?!". The English language does not have words for how flipping wonderful that is.

Ahh, this is so amazing. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Cannot wait for more!
- AB

Ahh, so well-written and perfect. 3 3 3

I think I know where this is headed and I sure hope I'm right...

Even if I'm not though, I love this! Honestly, your story should be the template for canon Nygmobblepot in the actual show. I mean, seriously, each chapter is just so perfectly them and so perfectly captures their relationship. And honestly, I would watch an entire SHOW of them just staring at each other lovingly like the do in the car in this chapter. *wistful sigh*

You do such a good job of writing not just Ed and Oswald, but all the other characters as well. I can completely hear Jim and Harvey's voices whenever they speak. Love it! Also, Ed talking to himself in the mirror and then being like "Ah no why" was hilarious.

Amazing, as always. Can't wait for part 2!
- AB

As usual, a wonderful chapter! Your writing style is phenomenal and you do such a good job capturing the essence of both of their personalities. The line "Ed liked riddles and sharp suits and murdering people. And Ed liked Oswald" is giving me life.

I just love the thought of Oswald murdering people and Ed walks in and very exasperatedly goes "Oh, Oswald!" like they're on a comedy or something. I REALLY hope we see that play out in the show. :D

Can't wait for more! My morning is always off to a good start when I wake up and see a new chapter! - AB

I love reading these! Keep up the great work

It's just so adorable, thank you ;)
I love "mr. riddles" !

Hi there! So i just binged all 4 chapters (oneshot stories) of this so far and I love them all! I do love how not all are hardcore, always in need of cuddles and fluff, but it is also nice for some fun time. Each oneshot is well written, I love your style of writing. And each one is unique in its own way. Can't wait for the next!

ahahaha that scene ! It was cute and a bit awkward when Jim and Harvey talked to Ed ;)
thank you and I hope you'll continue this fanfic !