This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read! Please continue.

It could be better.

What happened?! There better be a good reason to why you've stopped because I'm almost done with your sans trilogy and you haven't updated this one! It's awesome! Please don't stop!

Wow Elhini. This was awesome. I love how you connected the two stories together with Serif and Pristina. I can't wait for your next stroke of genius.

very niice

ohh... nice

I liked this one. It was good. Keep it up.

Wow Elhini. This was dark. Fantastic! Round of applause to ya. Can't wait to see the next stroke of genius.

Good job plz make more! :D

ohh... nice

I'm sorry, but I'm kinda out of the loop here. Where do Dream, Nightmare, Ink, and Error com from? I've never heard of them before except from similarly-named characters from different franchises.

interesting start

I love it Elhini. It's beautiful. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love it! I'm not at all familiar with the history of these guys, but I think your story might help with that. Keep up the good work!