Wow that's true feeling

Absolutely heartrending and uplifting at the same time. I got a little misty when Al was thinking about how his big brother promised to protect him when Trisha would travel. Thank you!

So poetic and beautiful! I love all the intricate details in Al's observations of Ed and the thoughts that go through his head when he looks at him. Al is so precious :')

OH FEELS

... So freaking beautiful.
I love it, very great job! 3 :')

This is so sweet and special for so many different reasons! :D I can't believe there aren't like, tons of reviews for it already, because this is so sweet on so many different levels! :D I really love brotherly stories like this, and this one is definitely one of the better ones I've read. You really dove into Alphonse's character a bit more and the way you portrayed his feelings was great, too!

I really love this piece for so many different reasons! I hope you write more like this one! I'd definitely read it if you did! :D If I wasn't a guest reviewer, I would have favorited this one a hundred times over! :D

Kudos! Great job! :D I hope to see more from you in the future! :D

-I Had A Dream