I hope you update soon.

Okay. I expected her to be a candidate but never in being an arcobaleno. What the hell?

It's a good story! Many kisses!

It was a good chapter, I will look forward to the next update!

Very interesting story. The plot line is rather unique, 8 like it.

In comparison to the other introductions, Hayate was seriously lacking.

Nice progress. Seeing her slowly gaining a little confidence is interesting.

The cutoff point for the first chapter is not that good.

BYAKURAN! What will the future arc be like with the knowledge of the future.

Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

In my over a decade of loving KHR and reading fanfics for it... never have I found one that had Xanxus win. Colour me intrigued, I'm very interested to see how the Vongola goes under his rule! I also really like what you've done with a lot of things that never made sense in the original series. Reborn is a series I adored so much at the time, but I look back and think "wtf is this garbage?". I still love it though haha xD you've brought sense to a ridiculous series, and I adore it

Ooooooooooo :)

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I look forward to the next chapter and hope it will come :)

If she ends up with someone I couldn't really choose so I guess I'd like to see her ending up with all of them in someway or another.
But I guess mostly she will and is falling head over heals with most of them :)

I hope for a happy end in the end because that would be fair to all involved.

Anyway I love this story and look forward to read more.

Regards,
Lunary

I'm going to stop around here I think. There's a few things that kind of turned me away from the fic as it went along :/

First, the physical bullying Tsuna is going through in the earlier chapters really stretches the bounds of being believable for one simple fact, she's a girl here. Not to say girls can't be bullied, they definitely can, but girls have their own form of bullying in comparison to boys. Not only are boys just generally more reluctant to physically beat a girl, society tends to pay much more attention when it does happen in comparison to boys 'rough housing'. The way you have a group of boys sneering about how weak she is while beating her seems rather weird. Why the hell would typical boys that age sneer at her 'weakness'? She's a girl, of course in their eyes she'd be physically weaker! Whether true or not that is how regular people would see it. If you want a good example of how bad a female bullying campaign can get in fiction while still being believable look at the web novel Worm.

Second, having the Reborn and the others break through somewhere when generations before haven't, and more importantly while Checker Face is still alive to prevent it, seems weird. I know it means you probably mostly just want to avoid that whole Arcobaleno thing, but dodging it this ways seems off kilter.

And third, the thing that stopped me here. The whole reason Mukuro meets up and helps Chrome is not immediately altruistic. It was at a time where he was completely trapped with the Vindice, she literally became his outside eye and ears and body. Hell, it's through that whole trapped situation and her wanting to genuinely be helpful that he gradually becomes less of an asshole. Without that whole being trapped thing first though he almost certainly wouldn't have given her the time of day.

Thanks for the fic :)