Good work. Nothing wrong with working out your own frustration over something that happened in real life. Writing and other creative projects can be quite therapeutic.

aww the ending was so cute. I really liked this story, I so could feel all of the emotions you had when writing this! hope you're feeling a lot better now darling

Sethie!

Great story...Thanks for writing. You have to deal with things how you deal with them. It is good to have an outlet. Glad you shared this with us. I am so glad Dean got out alive and he and Roman were reunited. Looking forward to the sequel.

I adore Ambreigns like this! Hurt!Deano is my jam! Roman so protective and caring with him, the best thing! This was lovely!

Heyho. Nette Storyline, super geschrieben und doch hab ich n fetten Fehler gefunden. :) 20mmol/l entsprechen einem BZ-Wert von ca 350mg/dl dementsprechend gibt es den Wert 80mmol/l gar nicht, denn da läge der Wert weit über 1400. ;) Also entweder die Einheit ändern, oder aus den 20mmol/l 1,1mmol/l machen und aus den 80 4,4 und alles ist schick. Und ja ich weiss, Klugscheisser mag Niemand... :)

There's only ONE WORD to describe this chapter and I'm gonna spell it out for you. G-R-E-A-T ! GREEEAAAT !
I wanted to write something smart but I quickly lost it, don't blame me. xD

I enjoyed this story. I am glad it had a happy ending. Its too bad things like this happen in real life and totally change people's lives.

Great little story! Loved it...very well done!

My advice...write how YOU wanna write...don't change your stories for anyone...as long as you are happy with it..that us all that matters...no one should dictate how you write...sorry, but that one that told you that you still didn't write the way they wanted you too is wrong...suggestions for another story, yes, changing this one? No...

Any ways, I'd love a sequel...be awesome!

Omg awesome chapter I can see why it wouldn't end so worth the wait and so much more yes yes yes yes to sequel can't wait love it another.
Awesome story X

I am LOVING this story so far. The fact that it's based on a real tragic event must be hard to write but you're doing a fantastic job! Can't wait for chapter 4 :-)

I apologize for the review I left, but do you really have to make these character so weak? What is up with everyone writing Dean as a weak person. Make him as a hero. I would understand if Dean was one of the people who actually helped some of the people who stuck in the mall and then he gets injured or something. That would penetrate better, that would be a fantasy hero story. But this is not that. I get this is trying to help you cope but I still think you went at this a wrong way.

Love this story

Chapter 3 ? PERFECT ! Seriously, I think it's great the fact that you go through this awful event by writing. Plus, this story is just awesome, thanks for this. :D

This is such a good story. You made ne feel like I was there. Way to go. Thumbs up