This sucks

I'll admit I started tearing up a bit but this was reeeeeally cute :)

hey! i LOVE your story! I was in tears by the end of the story. It literly broke my heart and warmed it at the same time. keep up the good work!

aaw! very sweet and touching! they seem more like brothers rather then cousins(they r closer then just cousins)! i liked it LOTZ!

AWWW! *sniff*

Awwww, that was so adorable! Funny face... such a cute nickname.

Lovely story.

Very cute fic. Loved it.

Pippin and Merry are so sweet together, specially cause they're cousins.

Uhmm... Wer, hate to break it to you, but its not Mary, its not Marry, it's Merry. Maybe YOU should read the books.

To the reviewers who are complaining about co-habiting cousins. Cousins are legally allowed to marry. The reason they are discouraged from doing so is to prevent genetic abnormalities occurring in their children - this would hardly be a problem with two males. Also there is no real sex in this story.

To the author - couple of little typos but quite sweet.

I'm just giving you fair warning. My friend, Shorty, is a HUGE Merry fan. She does not appriciate slash fics about him. My friend is a violent person, so, not to sound threating, you are in trouble.

Once again, this is on behalf of my frind, though I don't like slash fics either.

aww so sweet! this story was soo cute, i'm glad that they made up and Merry saved Pip! Hehe, Pippin's nickname is cute!

One word: Awww... So sweet! I'm a huge Pippin fan and my friend is a huge Merry fan. I love this. It really shows the relationship betwwen Merry and Pippin. Good work.

Wow, that was really cute. Normally I don't like Merry/Pippin fics becuase as were said they are cousins, but this one was very well written. I hope to see many more!

Marry and Pippin are cousins. Read the book.

Mary and Pippin are cousins...

Mary and Pippin are cousins...