oh my I just watched that movie. yes he is my Colonel too

I totally loved this chapter!

Good story so far

I’ve enjoyed this entire story just SO much, but I have to be honest, this chapter didn’t make any sense. First, there’s the obvious discrepancy from an earlier chapter when he asks Minerva about taking Hermione for the break. Minerva states that there is only one usable bedroom and Snape pretends that he’ll sleep on the couch. Then we get to this chapter and there are suddenly 3 bedrooms?

But beyond that, why on earth would he assume that she would want separate bedrooms at his house when they literally just came from sharing a room at Grimmauld, and before that, at Hogwarts?

Loved the story overall. Enjoyed it.

Points that I might note here, and that’s just personal preference, one of this;
1. Grammar can be a bit flawed from time to time, but it’s way better than some fics that we come across sometimes.2. I find Snape just too.. romantic, like a bit too thick of a cheesy snape, I was expecting him soon to jump up and sing a Backstreet Boys song for her. :P But again, personal preference.

All in all it was good.
Thank you for your story.

Fuck yes I knew he’d be gay! You’re the best

Oh hermioneand yay draco we love you, please be gay

Love the story, and am now hooked! Nice cliffie, btw...

On to the next segment!

Well done!

great story! I cant wait to read the sequel!

Oh my gooooooood! It's wonderful!

well sorry but I'm gonna stop here. Snape isn't really and neither is hermione. I think you dont get the psychology of Rowling's characters

I mean... it's just blood. Now I am a total H/S shipper but she seems too young for him. It just struck me right there how young and dumb she is. But still, good story.

I think it's f*cked up for ppl to say you can't orgasm during rape. It completely diminishes a womans trauma if she is someone who DID and makes her feel like she is wrong and wanted it. To the ppl saying you can't orgams don't you frigging dare. Get your ignorant ass a dose of law and order SVU as well, where they even say there it happens, read a medical journal whatever. Also, when ppl say this they diminish the experience of MEN who have been raped... men have to have an erection to penetrate so... everyone knows if they have an erection and orgasm then it wasnt rape. Give me a break.

Can’t wait to read the next part!