I THOUGHT THIS WAS A TOOTH-ROTTING FLUFF FICTION.

Short and sweet indeed, I really liked this ! The word choice was cute and fun; it made the story lively, and gave the characters (mostly Len, as he's the main focus) personality ~

I did not notice any mistakes grammar or spelling wise, so I'm impressed with that, considering. I also enjoyed the ending - gotta love Rin when she's being classic Rin, haha ~

Overall, this was a nice little read, thank you for writing it !

Amo a estos dos. De verdad, los haces demasiado shipeables que me duele saber que esto solo es el A.C.
Aún así, eso solo hace que quiera shipearlos más jajajajaja
Me encanta tu estilo. Sigue así.

This was good! (I don't mean to undermine you or smth. My vocab's not very wide /cries/) I liked your concept of Len, how you wrote how he felt about proposing. He feels real. Same with Miku even when she didn't have much detailed description and wasn't introduced until the end, I was able to grasp what sort of person she is. And, oh my god (!), Rin at the end was very hilarious! HAHAHAHAHA I don't know how to describe her as a whole but her type of character is my fave in a fanfic.

I noticed some weird spacing between the dialogue, which off-ed me a lil bit, thought I understand English is not your first language. I wish you could have showed more of everything, especially with Len and Miku's relationship...say, how they work as a couple among other things. I enjoyed reading it but I feel this story can still be improved. By the way, is this supposed to be a one-shot?

LenKu rox!
- Nat