In 15,000 words I feel like I've read something on an epic scale. Simply amazing. Concise without feeling rushed, and hilarious too.

Wow. The emotions and dialog are spot on - great job. You tell a LOT of story in just 15K words.

Can I just say I appreciate you? Because DAMN, I can go to sleep happily and contentedly now that I finished a romantic Jack fic on a positive, completed note. I love the unconditional puppy dog love that Jill has; really pleasant to see things with the man pan out well. :)

Your such a mary sue

This is a quali T story my friend. It was a pleasure to read this and makes me happy inside to read a story where jack gets a (for the most part) happy ending! Thank you for writing and publishing this 3