big kudos to you, i loved reading this. the exploration of this zenyatta zarya dynamic was very interesting.

This is so good! I love what you did here. It felt very natural. Excellent work!

interesting, very interesting

Now that was a great story- believable, with the characters acting accurately and very well written! Great job!

I really liked this. And I loved the title lesbian lust goddess. Haha. If you ever make more with zarya and zenyatta I would definitely read them. Keep on keeping on.

Hours, dozens of stories, seeing shipping fic after shipping fic, hanzo x torbjorn, bastion x ganymede, whatever it is, i've gotten weary. There's a lot of potential in what overwatch is but either the fic lasts 2 chapters or is written by someone who doesn't think grammar is a thing.
After all this, i think ive found maybe the second or third overwatch fanfiction that legimately makes me love the fandom again. not only is this written with a lack of interfandom faffing but it's believable, honest, and all around one of my favorite ones i've seen in a while. bravo, i love this thing. zarya and zenyatta both seem super in character and all of these interactions are a joy to read.

-squeals- this is beautiful and heart wrenching and I want more. Give me more of this. Please. I need it.

Oh my gosh yes! I am so happy you wrote this. I love Zarya and Zenyatta, but when I realized Zarya hated Omnics I was oh boy I hope someone writes about them getting closer together. Awesome! Nice writing!

M-my heart...*spluttering incoherently *

This I love! BONDING! YAY! Now I need to see Junkrat and him become better acquainted and maybe become at least friends. Still love the story lass! I also love you didn't go for the ship outright like many would do. It has a nice feeling about it and i like it for that :3 Keep up the great work :D

This has all of my yes. The writing; impeccable. The flow; peaks and troughs perfectly, with the interest curve of the narrative effectively paced. Gold stars all around. Although honestly, I ship Zarya and the TF2 heavy. Both defensive classes, strong, Russian, and with a love for big guns. They'd be perfect. But I also ship Bastion and the Level 3 sentry (some SFM's give the sentries personalities :p), so make of that what you will.

Yooo zaryas my fave too im into transformers and it broke my heart when i learned she hated robots! But this is perfect this is my new hc. Zar and zen bros for life.

I love stories like this, great character study. Kept me on the edge of my seat from beginning to the end. I'd like to see you do more!

Enjoyed. Good to see some other characters get a some attention.