I know it’s not the most important bit, but your John is perfect. So good. Great characterization.

Also, still very, terribly romantic. All of it.

My golly gosh, you are really such a talented writer. Thank you for bringing so much joy to my life! I do wish I can repay you somehow.

One day when I'll find time to write my own sherlock fanfic and I hope I can be half as good as you.

Lyra in NC

Aww. :,)

That was wonderful! A more light-hearted take on a typically heavy scenario. Quite the stroke of brilliance to write it from Mary's POV! Bravo!

So darn cute I can't stand it! And I loved how you used the baby monitor as a way to spy on them! Brilliant!

Nicely done, of course! Glad to be able to count on you for providing great stories! OH - and a note to your opening comment on Ch. 2: I saw you claim to be no good at brevity either, just like me. ;-) Lol!

I don't think I've ever said how much I like the way you write the characters John and Mary.

OMG! Just read your response to me, and thank you so much! I really love all of your work, and as long as you keep doing what you love to do, then I am happy. I'm waiting to make an account once I have more time this summer and I can start posting some stories of my own. ;) Okay, back to the story.

Hope you don't mind me putting a prompt suggestion here for a new fic before catching up on the third chapter of this awesome one: an entire story about Sherlock and Molly taking a two week trip to the beach.

*Cue awkward hyena cackle* Okay, now that the embarrassing noises are over, on to the review! Simply lovely! I am so thankful that you were able to update this last chapter! It was absolutely wonderful. Leave it to Sherlock to be aware of Mary and John's spying. That line really got me, haha. What a nice resolution with such a promising beginning for a better future! Thank you! :D

Hehhehehehehehe my favorite ships ending w/ a good ol cuddle from their respective mates! This was fabulous! I'm glad Sherlock and Molly finally fessed up! Good stuff here!

Delightful! Beautiful! and so very perfect. You're always amazing and this story shows off your beautiful talent perfectly! Oh, love the line about relationships are done with care attention to detail much like an experiment, I know I didn't quote you exactly but that line...wonderful and awesome. Thank you for writing this, you really are fantastic!

This was a fun, delightful read. And I adore your Mary!

Lovely ending! John and Mary were hilarious
Lizzy

Fantastic. Mary is such a hoot. Exactly my head canon of how Mary would be.