Um, this wasn’t my favorite chapter. I thought this story was supposed to be about the Host Club moms, including Ranka as an honorary one (Ranka so far has barely been in it, which I hope will change. I want to see how he gets along with the women.). Sometimes OCs can make a story better, but I don’t like these guys. WTF is up with that kid pulling a gun?! And so many people talking without it stating who said what most of the time made it *extremely* difficult to follow along. It’s hard enough getting used to the new names of moms not shown in the canon, but adding a bunch more names all at once, too? On top of there being more characters, several people had more than one name, and one character had almost the same name as another character. I was completely lost half the time.

I love this chapter it made a bad day turn better thanks.

This is an awesome idea! The moms need more attention. I wonder how Ranka will fit in...

"Whacking it like no tomorrow.” OMG! LOL!
"Is that a…"
"Yes, I believe so."
"And there's a child…COMING OUT OF IT?!"
(Runs away)
“My work here is done.”
OMG! ROFLMAO! HA HA HA, tears in my eyes!

Ok then...

This is a cute little story so far. Keep up the good work.

Love it!

you must update. this is such a unique hilarious story. i like that you are giving the host club moms credit and recognition

UPDATE PLEASE! I LOVE THIS AND YOU MUST CONTINUE IT! PLEASE, I BEG YOU!

Great story I can't wait for the next chapter

This is great! I'm glad that there's somebody out here representing the parents:)