Amazing writing dude, there little of Raven in canon, beside "the strong survives", could be nice if she is like that in canon too

ahh she fascinates me as well.

I am hopeful that we will get to see her and Yang working together and bonding... i don't think its likely but i am hopeful.

Yang really deserves some kind of happiness.

ahh she deserves it the most out of all the team in my opinion. she has the most need for... closure and whatnot.

she the most selfless, courageous... and in my opinion under-appreciated character in the series probably

And then Raven goes back to the White Fang, says hi to Adam, and stabs him through the arm, claiming to be training him to always be prepared for any event, given the existence of semblances based off illusions and deception.

Happily ever after.

So fookin' good. This is exactly what parental spats are like - uncomfortable, unhelpful, and brutally honest. Watching your family fall apart can probably feel worse than losing an arm. More pleaseeeeeee.

It's refreshing to think of Raven as someone who didn't just abandon Yang.

The writing is quite solid!