Love it moreeeee yandere yukino

An occasional grammatical error or spelling is fine by any means. However, the state of the essay deteriorates as read further and further into this particular chapter. Please fix your grammar and thought processes and an occasional break in long sentences wouldnt hurt. The idea for this fanfiction is satisfactory but please just fix the errors, it gets really hard to read.

hey whats up, are you alright ?

Bruh how can you abandon us like this :( In any case, I hope you're doing well. I really really fell in love with your writing. I wish you well wherever you are

We need to somehow keep this story going

and of course, you have to abandon this just when things were getting good...

Im still here waiting...

And this is why yanderes scare the shit out of me. They're mentally damaged to an unnatural level.

Update pls

Please use proper grammar and take a look at sentence structure and tenses.

Dang it just when it was getting to the juicy parts hope you pick this back up someday.

updateee

Grammar needs improvement

Reading this story is so weird. The structure and grammar is amazing and almost on par with what Watari Wataru would write but then there are a lot of moments where it seems like you've only learned how to write just yesterday. Proof read your work please so that these confusing errors don't appear.

I am okay with the writing for the most part but it seems your grammar and editing needs a little work. Maybe have someone proof-read it before posting? Sorry to be harsh, but it is the truth. It's hard to read your work without having to assume what you meant to write.