This is really good, I cant wait to see what will happen next!

wait... invisible arms like elfen lied?
...huh.

I’m coming in as a new reader, and I’ve gotta say this is fantastic. A unique beginning, an atypical devil fruit, an interesting writing style - all of it is there. I’m legitimately excited to see how Blue develops and find out about her past!

Another amazing chapter. I love Blue and everyone's relationship. Her and Zoro crack me up! I love the way you describe Luffy, he finest care who you were only who you will be really hits the nail on the head for his character! Nami is perfectly in character as well, you describe her so precisely Can't wait for the next chapter

I'm beyond intrigued. Blue is a really interesting character and I greatly enjoy how you have her interact with the Strawhats. Hope to see more soon!

Mmmm, interesting! :D

Great chapter this story looks so good!

Good chap

I can't wait for the continuation of this story; for I must say, it is quite intriguing.

idk if you'll still see the favorites/follows from recurring readers since it's the same fic, but i honestly don't remember much of how this tale used to be and i quite like how this basically-entirely-new story reads. very dramatic, unfolds neatly; i'm looking forward to how it all goes!

Great chapter

I’m very curious to see where this story goes.

Can't wait to see where this goes, please update again soon!

I can’t wait to read more!

Volition. noun. the faculty or power of using one's will

Violation. noun. the action of violating someone or something.

You used violation instead of volition multiple times (see Nami/Zoro chat)