Such a great ending to a wonderful story. Merida said yes to Young Macguffin! I liked the reactions of their respective fathers. I bet they are both very happy and proud of their children for agreeing to marry each other. You did a great job on keeping everyone in character, and paying attention to the small details. Please keep writing! I can't wait to see what else you have written!

Best,

SawuScimitar74

Young Macintosh can be funny at times even with his arrogance.

This was a great chapter to read. Well done!

Hopefully he will eventually work up the courage to ask her. Young Macguffin deserves to be happy with her.

Young Macintosh sure has some nerve calling Young Macguffin an idiot. Young Macintosh will never be a good match for Merida.

I liked the talk Young Macguffin had with his father in this chapter. Hopefully Lord Macguffin will become a grandfather in the future.

That was some cute interactions between Merida and Young Macguffin. The end of the chapter was so sweet. :)

You're doing a great job with this story! Please keep it up!

I liked the talk with Merida and her mother. It was interesting to know how she met Fergus. :)

I'm glad that Young Macguffin said that Merida is not something to be won, because she really isn't!

I liked the translations from Young Macguffin's accent. I will admit that I had some trouble understanding what he was saying when I saw Brave for the first time.

That was a sweet moment between him and Merida. :)

Nothing like the lords getting into arguments.

Nice work!

Young Macintosh is too arrogant for my liking. Great chapter by the way.

That was a noble act by Young Macguffin. That says that he has a selfless side to him. I hope he will end up with Merida in the end.

Great chapter! Glad that Merida was able to make it out alive. Personally, I think that of the three suitors, the best match for Merida would be Young Macguffin. He may be a shy lad, but he means well. That is what I like about him. :)