Wow, I really enjoyed reading this! It reminded me of when I was in junior high and I'd be on chats on deviantart with people. I loved how you featured so many monsters, and it was fun to figure out who was who based on their screen names (a few, it took me a second, but it a good way. Lots of fun!). Whenever I read anything with burgerpants, I expect it to be full of humour, and this was! I would honestly read a lot more of this if you made it!

This was a lot of fun to read, especially because all sorts of monsters Frisk has encountered (or could have encountered depending on who plays the game) showed up in the chat. It was great seeing characters that you only see in certain places for a brief period of time (before moving on with the game) being portrayed here, like Woshua or the mouse or that tiny frog in the Ruins. After all, one of the best parts of Undertale, at least in my opinion, is how every monster is unique and you can interact with them; they all feel like characters more than mobs. I mean, even at the end, in the credits, you can see how every single monster you've fought has gone on with their lives, and darn it, I'd be lying if that didn't make me grin uncontrollably. Like, seriously, you've put so many characters (Pyrope, Chilldrake, Shyren...), and they all had something entertaining to say in the story...

There were a lot of funny scenes, really: Jerry showing up, Doggo writing, Woshua's appearance (and Sans omg XD), the Nice Cream Guy... It really made me smile the fact that everyone seems to know each other: now I'm starting to have the headcanon that the Underground is so small that everyone probably knows each other to an extent (except the Ruins since practically no one can enter the ruins). Burgerpant's complaining was also amusing (well, Burgerpants in general is amusing), but I especially loved it when he mentioned Frisk because it reminded me of the game :D Also love the fact that the chat is the Trash Brigade lol, it definitely couldn't have any other name.

Overall, I liked this. I don't feel very comfortable judging the characterization since it's a story about a chat in the internet (so I have to consider that certain characters may be more open than in real life), but I don't think there was anything glaringly OOC. It looks like it's not complete either... So I can only hope to see more, if there truly will be more. I'll look forward to it!

I can't remember, but I think Alphys' account name was just ALPHYS? Eh.

Anyway, there isn't much I can say about the writing. I mean, you did get the bad spelling right, ironically. I like this fic. Maybe we might even get a second chapter?!