I noticed one major problem with Mabel,

“I think I bedazzled it too much.”

According to Mabel you can never over bedazzle.

Romance not family.. .

I like the open ending, and it was a great fic. please write more stories like this!

So Bill wanted Dipper as his son? I mean, he has been acting paternal, fatherly, in a way. In a Cipher way, I suppose. Huh. Or maybe he wants a pet to take care of, to keep him company. Or both. I believe it is the former.

Awww I'm so heartbroken that your ending this story, it's been one of my favorites for a long time and that didn't seem like the end.:( Btw what happened to Ford? Surly he wouldn't of left without saying bye to Dipper, did Bill brainwash Ford too?

Hm... this grows more interesting every chapter! I'm really glad I came back to read the rest of this fic after watching a bit more of Gravity Falls.

Oh poor DIPPER! My heart literally went out to the poor guy! Those last couple of paragraphs made my heart hurt! Probably becuase I just threw up this morning, and so I can really relate. Oh that poor, poor baby.

The angst is real in this chapter.

Yay! Mabel juice!

Awan, this is really well written! Poor Dipper, tho.

I feel bad for Bill now...
NO-NO-NO-NO U can't fall for it XD

Oh, I love this fanfic so the great work up XD

Awwwwwwwww well the story was good while it lasted. Thank you for writing this as I really did enjoy it 3

I would imagine that Bill is gonna keep Dipper as his pet, and manipulate and brainwash Dipper into wanting to stay. Maybe Ford is trapped with Bill as well. Cause I don't think Bill wants his "BEST FRIENDS" to leave him! XD

AHHHH! I LOVE IT! It's kind of cute, how Bill acts as a teenager. Thank you for updating and please do it again quickly!

Maravilloso