You've positively nailed Sam right here- Great drabble!

This was a great view of Sam. I really liked it!

I like this a lot. Well written, engaging and makes me want more!

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review August 2016

This is a tight and intense piece, delivering very well Sam's thoughts and feelings. I can practically hear the "Not fair! Not fair" with every pounding footfall. Great job!

Well-written introspective. Good one.

You've set out the reasons for Sam's rebellion to perfection here - well done!

You did get into his head well enough - this was never the life he wished for, and look what fate gave him. Sad to think about it. Good to see you back in the game :-)

Kate

Great job, it's hard to figure out what a person is thinking and feeling but I think you caught it well.

Sam building up a head of steam. He won't let this go any time soon, will he?

Excellent!

:)

I like this. I can imagine that is what Sam might have been thinking as he was growing up.

Poor Sam!

Nicely done.

Sincerely,
Miriam

Great story and peek into Sam's head - it's good to see you back in the challenges! I like the touch about AP calculus- because of course! And the 'chained to the regimen of family' and the 'stoked the determination' were perfect lines as well as excellent insights into Sam's headspace.