Just finished and am looking forward to a possible sequel. Do consider writing one!

Also, I didn't get the possible joke at the end of the story. When Gaby asked Illya what was in Istanbul and he said "That Hagia Sophia." What is so funny that Gaby laughs, and who is Hagia?

-UD

Upon reading chapter 1: For a while I thought you were simply copying everything directly from the movie, but I recognized mistake. All is pretty good except for when you added the "f" word. I liked the movie because it DIDN'T have any strong language in it.

-UD

Exactly what I was looking for. Thank you. Beautifully written and melded with the original. Hope there will be more.

If only the original movie had all these pretty Gaby/Illya moments! Enjoyed them all I love the way you have all 3 in character, like in the movie.
Please do write the sequel, with lots of sweet and perfect Gallya scenes. And keep it pre-relationship if possible :-)
Thanks for sharing your story.

Another wonderful chapter! :-)

Their wrestle scene was great, if only we were able to watch more of it in film! Enjoying very much all your Gaby & Illya interactions Too bad the movie wasn't longer, LOL

Loving all the additions to movie, can't get enough Gallya, good job!

Great beginning, nice new Gaby/Illya moments!

This was amazing. You did not miss a beat with these characters. Thanks for writing this and I can't wait for your sequel.

Loved the whole thing. This is actually the third time I've read it. I'm anxiously awaiting the sequel! :)

WOW.
This story was seriously one hell of a good one. You really managed to shed some light unto the inner thoughts and turmoil of our beloved characters. Seriously, I'm saddened to see it end but never you mind me.
So let me just say, well done and keep up the good work.

Love, Mag

What a chapter ! I really enjoyed it from beginning to the very end. You did a wonderful job with this story :D
Did I read 'sequel'? Can't wait ;)

Sooo cutere
Lover the details

This is probably the longest fanfiction's chapter I've ever read, it must have been a huge amount of work to write it :)
It was, as always, excellent, and the tracker scene was very well done.
I like the idea of another unfinished kiss after the break in into the factory. Anyway, I loved everything in this chapter ;)

What a chapter :)
Drunk Gaby is always very nice to read, and the "You are very violent for such a little thing" was so funny !

I loved the scene at the car racing, and Illya's sudden change of attitude towards Gaby after she talked and flirted with Alexander. Jealousy is quite obvious ;)

That was a very good chapter.