Oof, right in the feels...
Well, I'm going to go sob into a bowl of ice cream now, because that was beautiful and I have no words.

~Ceara

Sweet...and painful, knowing this is the last moment they'll share. *sniff*

Very sweet. I always wished that C S Lewis had written just a little more of Caspian and Ramandu's daughter together - I always wondered exactly what happened when he got back to the island!
And I did like what you did with the title! Very clever :) - and appropriate.
Lovely. :)

I very much wished that this story was longer. It's been years since I've seen a Caspian/ Ramandu's Daughter story. Still I enjoyed it.

"You would think I was about to go away for years!"

Ow, the tragic irony. :(

"Translate it out of the French"

*does so*
oh
ow
that hurts even more
whyyyyy

No, but it's gorgeous, really. I have observed a severe lack of proper canon romance in this archive, and I do so love when people not only write it, but write it well, in a way that feels natural to the characters. And when they don't make use things from the movie.

NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Nonononononononononononononononono! She can't die! She can't! :(

I would say that is really cute...if I didn't know what was about to happen! Good job, at any rate. I hope you plan to continue with another chapter!
Blessings,
Sophia

... Feels already.

Ariel_of_Narnia

*bursts into tears*

*kills the Green Witch all over again*

That was ... that was beautiful and sad and makes Caspian's loss so much more immediate.

nice