Oh that was beautiful, though now I wonder if you’re one of the people who teases me because of my gamertag. I get Bellabooty a lot.

I'm honestly in love with this story, I'd love more one shots in this universe, or long story set in it. Keep writing.

Gambit.

Rubys last line made this whole one shot for me. bravo

Nuuuooo! I forgot this is only oneshot! I was looking forward for the next chapter when I'm reading this.. :(( This is really good… Can you please made a multi-chapter with this?

This was absolutely one of the funniest things I've ever read on fanfiction.

xD are you a proffesional comedian!
My throat hurts and my sis thinks i'm crazy from all the random laughter

This is freaking hilarious. In a good way. Had me cracking up at every joke Yang made. It was perfect. Purrfect. Would absolutely love to see more

Funny :)

nice. i can dig it!

I can't believe the amount of detail used. It's well-described, and the details just click into place. Even though you utilised the vantage point narrative, it's superb how the events were moving along.

Special credit goes to the fact that this is a good establishment of the AU. By making them fail the heist, you've set out that they, as robbers, are not Mary Sues. Portraying them in such a light gives off a tinge of realism.

Also mentioning how the chemistry between the four is. You've maintained the dynamics of the team, albeit slightly lewder. Though I can't help but wonder why Weiss was break-in and not hadling the RPG when Blake would have been a better thief.

All in all, you could say it's...

One hell of a ride.

Eh? Eh?

Loved it. Funny, quirky, brilliantly written and a lot of authenticity to the characters still. Great work!

this is cute to the max thanks for the great story the lemon in the next chapter is gonna be the best