Very good story. I like how Aslan sent the rain to end the drought and it some how had a connection to Lilandil being with child.

Wow, the ending paragraph brought tears to my eyes. I dunno why, it wasn't sad. I guess it was just so happy and sweet :D Confused, worried Caspian and the Queen (as I guess a lot of first time mothers like to do) shocking the daylights out of him. Aaagh, I love it!
I loved this chapter! Rain is one of my favorite things and I really loved you how described it. And everyone's joy when it came. And Rumblebuffin being his usual giant self :D
I liked quick thinking Mavramorn, too.
Oh, and I loved how when the rain came, Caspian's wife stood with her arms stretched out towards the East. That was a lovely image.

Looking forward to the one-shot!

I might as well join the fauns in their dancing! Short as this story may be, the happiness within is positively golden! Lovely story, through and through.
One thing, though, should it not be Giant Wimbleweather, not Rumblebuffin?
Ariel_of_Narnia

Ha! nice to guess correctly!

I'm enjoying this immensely! I'm loving how you're dealing with an older Caspian and his being a king over a suffering land and his own personal struggles. His desperation and weariness come through loud and clear, as do the brighter spots that follow. I await the next installment!

Ariel_of_Narnia

Awesome! I loved this chapter :D

The part about Glenstorm and the stairs was funny. I really liked Caspian's desperate plea to Aslan. And your description of the sea being so hot that swimming in it was like being a pickle in a jar was perfect. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

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Very intriguing story! I have not seen very many like this on this site. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh, a chapter story. How very exciting! Of course you would have to post it during August when we're all sweltering ;D

I love the idea that Caspian and his wife are like people in a fairy tale, longing for a child. I love how you've characterized Caspian so far.
Narnia in the age of Caspian is really lovely, too: a newly united people, talking animals and dryads repopulating and being able to go about freely, the new customs and rituals. It's great! So little is written about Caspian's reign (aside from lame romance stories). I can't wait to see where this goes.
Oh, and I adore the idea that Mavramorn married the Duke of Galma's daughter, and that they now have five (freckled) daughters.
By the way, how many years has it been since Dawn Treader?