Reviews for Unexpected
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 10 . 9/12/2015
I enjoyed the last chapter, if that's what it was.
Savannah00007 chapter 9 . 8/24/2015
That is great chapter please update soon
LillyMayFlower chapter 9 . 8/24/2015
Oh my gosh that was so beautiful, I loved it! I'd love to write some Dylan/Rita in my fic, but I don't even know where to start, and you just get it spot on every single time, I'm so jealous :) "Take me home" has got to be the sweetest thing I've ever read :D Keep going, I can't wait for the next update
LillyMayFlower chapter 8 . 8/18/2015
I was really choked up reading this chapter! It was so good, and that is an understatement but I don't know what else to say! You're doing an amazing, amazing job of this story, every time I get a notification for this story I smile because I can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/16/2015
Pleeeease update!
beckyboogle chapter 7 . 8/13/2015
OMG! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Please update soon!
Tanith Panic chapter 7 . 8/12/2015
Oh no please don't break my heart here, I'm really uneasy now. Good suspense-building chapter.
LillyMayFlower chapter 7 . 8/12/2015
Oh my goodness! This whole chapter was amazing - your Rita and Dylan scenes never stop making me smile, I love that they're so happy in other's company. But that ending, oh wow, I honestly gasped out loud, I so, so hope that Rita will be okay and her relationship with Dylan will still stand! I cannot wait for your next update :D
Tanith Panic chapter 6 . 8/9/2015
This is really good, I wasn't sure about Dylan and Rita at first but that pairing works nicely.
LillyMayFlower chapter 6 . 8/9/2015
This was amazing, I love reading Dylan as someone other than "a moody bastard" as you so brilliantly put it! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I hope Rita will tell the police.
LillyMayFlower chapter 5 . 8/8/2015
You've written this so beautifullly, I nearly cried at the end of that chapter! I'm really glad she's told Dylan, hopefully now she can get the help she needs. Dylan's reaction was just right too, you've written him in character really well . I can't wait to keep reading!
Tanith Panic chapter 4 . 8/6/2015
Rita, you are not a dirty slapper, you are a nice lady who's been abused by an excuse for a human being. You bring out her pain so well and I really can't blame her for going back to the vodka this time.
birthdaycake-storytime-fall chapter 4 . 8/6/2015
A great update. I'm loving this story, please try to update soon. You're a really good writer.
Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 4 . 8/6/2015
Poor Rita :(
Tanith Panic chapter 3 . 8/5/2015
You've brought out Mark's repulsiveness so well here, poor Rita has nothing to feel grubby for, but it's a very human reaction. I know what I hope happens next but don't like to push my ideas on you as I'm quite sure you know how you want to continue this story.
Sad but well written chapter.
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