Reviews for The Shell
Guest chapter 14 . 3/31/2019
Are you thinking of continuing this story!? I know it’s been over year or so.. and would love to read Ten’s POV if he found Lu and Green/ Sam!
ygag8d chapter 20 . 1/28/2019
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for making this~ I hope this story isn't abandoned cause I love it!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/4/2018
More please!
Redtailxclaw chapter 20 . 7/16/2018
omg I love this story so much, my all time fav chapters are with Ten and Lu prov i cant wait for them to find there Green.
DeityOfDeadlyRose chapter 20 . 7/9/2018
It’s so great! I can’t wait to see what happens next!
MaiWishes chapter 1 . 1/17/2018
Read
MaiWishes chapter 20 . 1/16/2018
Whoa those two are merry little devils! The way they roar to each other over distance is cool. I like Lu! She seems to be the slightly more unhinged. Also its refreshing to see a scientist figure like Green in this genre also be practical and empathetic and just normal.

But why have you stopped updating? WHY. This is very good. You say you have Big Plans for Green
The Megaevolved Pony chapter 20 . 1/15/2018
Mega Prime 1: I wish ...
Mega Prime 5: THAT ME AND MY OTHER SELVES ...
Mega Prime 2: Could do something ...
Mega Prime 3: To quell this burning desire, this ...
Mega Prime 4: Insanity, growing inside of two magnificent creatures.
Mega-7: What are your thoughts?
Guest chapter 20 . 10/10/2017
Pz update
StrudelQueen chapter 20 . 9/4/2017
Really like the story so far and especially love the little snippets in Ten and Lu's point of view. Seeing as Jurassic World is going to be released next year, there's the possibility of changes being made and new canon stuff that the first Jurassic World didn't explain, like how dinosaur DNA samples were taken off the island by Wu and stuff. And other would be Jurassic World stuff that might be there, but considering this fanfic has already made canon divergence from the start, there's not much to worry about sticking close to canon.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next few chapters where we get to the canon plot of the story. We're entering the main plot. Really hoping that Ten and Lu don't get killed by the T Rex at the end but I feel like with two Indominous Rexes, it'll be impossible especially since Ten is way over 50 feet maybe 70 feet. But it'll be quite a fight anyway.

I also feel that since the Indominous are part raptor, despite having the base DNA of T-rex, they might partner up with the raptors. I wonder how that'll play out in that one chase scene.

Anyway, can't wait for your next update!
DarkAngelmi818 chapter 20 . 8/28/2017
Like it she's kind of like daenerys and these are her dragons . It's kind of cheesy but I like it please update soon
SpiderAppleCider chapter 20 . 8/25/2017
Another great chapter, but I have a quick question. What is Green to Ten and Lu? Is she a mother figure, pack figure, or just someone they have always 'had' that it made them desperate to regain being separated for so long? I know some animals that even if they are apart at a very young age they won't cling to their parents after a while, like deer.

It's been really interesting to read the workings of Ten and Lu's mindset, much like children, very destructive children. XD
SinofPride chapter 20 . 8/17/2017
This story is so good :
I want them to find Sam and all but at the same time I don't. I don't know if they would get along since I doubt Sam would be cool with all this murder.
wolviegurl chapter 20 . 8/2/2017
Great chapter, more please
Guest chapter 20 . 7/31/2017
Hmmm
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