I have just reread this story for the 3rd time in 3 years, that is to say if I liked it, especially for the new features like Captain Stoval, the new Bingley, the way to deal with Lydia's situation etc.
plus it's well written!

That would be a dream come true for miss bingley... Danm! Hate it when she gets her way!

I really enjoyed this take on the story. Thank you.

Wickham's actions are truly shocking. Just reading this chapter makes me shudder. And to think the evil monster gets handed money and his way paved to a new life by his rich friends. Ugh

I really enjoyed your story! The only suggestion I have would be to give names to those with titles. Reading Duke of _ or Lord of _ gives the story a feeling of not being finished. It also gives confusion as to if Lord _ that did "A" is the same Lord _ that did "B". I understand there might be some historical accuracy concerns but really, A Bennet from Longbourn is not historically accurate so you really can create any names for your peerage, that is the beauty of writing fiction. Thank you for sharing your story!

I loved this story, amazing work.

Ok, I like this story, but definitely Bingley and Georgiana are going to be the part I absolutely don't like.

Noooo Georgiana and Bingley? I always thought about them like siblings

How could tolerate Mrs. Bennet?

I like Elizabeth is happier after what Lydia did!
Well, Darcy seems doesn't care so much

Stupid Lydia... And poor

Yep, I like Mr. Bennet, but he lacks as a father

Justo en este momento a Bingley se le dio por madurar

Bingley is so aaaaaaaaaah kahssgsjwjshs!

Richard is my favorite ️