all the try, but the result - all the attempts, but the result

woodsman - woodsmen

You know, while the man may have deserved a punishement of being entombed, the horse was innocent. Harry could at least have put the poor thing out of its misery.

Intriguing and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Interesting start to what promises to be a good story. I have read quite a number of FanFiction stories, including crossovers, and most have been good. It looks as if it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going. I am a big fan of Keith Laumer's Bolo series.

Thanks for sharing!

That last AU was really interesting.
Nice fanfic in general too. Well written and fun to read.

I found a few potential minor misspellings and such:
1
"he later." - "he latter."
"for their were few people" - "for there were few people"
"wizard interested in " - "wizard was interested in "
" a thousand head of beef," - " a thousand heads of beef,"
", but there a half doz" - ", but there was a half doz"
"m around her." - "m around here."
2
"- magical he could port with him an" - "- magic he could port with him an"
"e wasn't anonymous as he" - "e wasn't as anonymous as he"
"The shocked her." - "That shocked her."
"with a some criminals " - "with some criminals "
3
"Who did t" - "How did t"
"He felt horrible about. " - "He felt horrible about it. "
" he'd been given him because" - " he'd been given because"
"ou've it heard it four" - "ou've heard it four"
'r the Eyrie."' - 'r the Eyrie.'
4
" it had actually happen. H" - " it had actually happened. H"
"bred his lined with large" - "bred his line with large"
"which didn't really wasn't all " - "which really wasn't all "
6
"onset" - "ones"

Thanks for writing and have a great day!

Rereading this makes me wonder if a continuation of this last chapter might be the better GoT story than the Wizard one. No that I did not like the main story. I did. but this one is interesting without the magic. Even a story based on your 5th chapter, perhaps without the interference of the Wizard. Maybe Ned leaving Kings Landing when he was first fired by Robert would be interesting.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

I think this was the first ever HP/GOT crossover fanfic I ever read, and I can not congratulate myself enough for finding it and trying a new genre.

Thank you soooo much for this gem. I think I have re-read it a dozen times already and I hope that you will try your hand at this genre again.

... and please with a male Harry... I simply can NOT stomach femHarry garbage.

Great tale, and I am no fan of GOT. But I enjoyed this take on that tale. But DUNE?!

Oh wow, I loved this story. Everything about it was good. Thank you for your time and effort.

Thank you for that! Finally a story with a Wizard!Harry in Westeros. Finally a story that does not pair him in a tormented love affair with Khal Drogo. Finally a story that does not use Fem!Harry.

I immensely enjoyed it!

Cracking good story and I look forward to the Dune follow-up.

An excellent tale. The AU sections are a treat.

THE best HP/GOT crossover fic on this site. Nothing can convince me otherwise.

THANK YOU for a much enjoyed ride.

Have a good 2020, hope you will publish more, soon.

Good story, wish you would writr the next part