I just wanted to mention that Album Dumbledore isn't a Potter and he defeated Grindivald

Hi,
I just wanted to tell you want an awesome story you have written. I really like how May ended up marrying Sirius. Thanks for writing the story!

SO...I am quite satisfied with your style of writing. Grammar is fine. However.. as a HARRY POTTER FAN, ... JAMES' EYES ARE BLOODY HAZEL!

Hey. Just for you know that I loved your story! Thank you so much. :)

I loved it ... and I cried so much ! 3

I loved this story,It's one of the best James/Lily fics I've read.

you have a phenomanal gift in little spelling errors but that is ok because that story was the best i have read in years.

So damn sad! That was an awesome story. Be sure that its going on my favorites list! I'll probably read any other chaptered fics that you have as well.

This story is indescribable. The perfect Lily/James story, with just the right amount of Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione. The whole story was amazing. The words flowed, great description and dialogue, and the characters are exactly how I imagined them. This was so sad, but it was also heartwarming, exciting, funny, and rapturing. I absolutely love this story, and was sad to see it end (by the way, the ending was wonderful, so sad and sweet!) You are an awesome writer! Best James/Lily fic I've read in ages! ~Caseyandra

I really loved this story and cried my eyes out when I read Lily and Jamess' death scenes. I was so sad that the story ended. Please keep writing other stories. This one was great

Lily and May decided about a half an hour later that it was time to leave, and let May get back to her job.

you put MAY when you meant AMY just thought i'd point that out.

same here i hate it when people decide to make a Harry and Hermione or jacob and bella its very annoying and i only like it that way anyho THIS STORY IS GREAT AND AWESOME SO FAR

This is definitely the best story I have ever read on FF. Thanks so much! Since we now know that half of your characters actually die, half of this story is impossible, but I still love it!

Thanks so much!

Allison

I thought this chapter was amazing, one of the best in this incredible story! Sorry I didn't review before! I really love this story and I hope you continue it!

for new stories here's a tip, if this sounds a bit rude I don't mean it to be. James has hazel eyes.