You can't leave it there?! This story is awesome...please write a sequel! :)

The end...
Hmmm.. I try to imagine different ideas where :- If Thorin, Fili and Kili die in the Battle will Dain accept him? Of course Balin and the rest of the Company can vouch for him:) OR Everyone lives but Thorin, in fact the others in the Company too will not live for five centuries. Maybe he can go to Rivendell or maybe Thranduill will forgive him and take him back. Why do I give myself a headache? I like your ending! :) :) :)

Aggghhhhhhhh... another cliffhanger! I also want to know what Thranduill said to Legolas.

oh! don't end it there! It would of been great to see the friendship blossom

I like this Legolas so much more than the hobbit movie version

Cool! I loved this:)! Please write more

I have been following your story from the first chapter and I think the theme is quite interesting. You do have grammar/spelling mistakes scattered about in the story but your English is not that bad that makes it difficult to understand what you want to convey. For me, I just correct those mistakes in my mind as I read. I think you are very brave and I am sure you will improve as you write more in future. Perhaps you can get someone to check it for you before posting? I am not a writer and am not a native English speaker too, so I cannot offer my help. Sorry:) Keep on writing, you have good ideas:)

Great update! Keep up the great work. :)

awesome fanfic, please update soon thanks

Please write more:)!

Cool! This is awesome:)!

This is an really interesting story! I really hope you write more. :)