I read your review and why Cedric died, it makes sense, sometimes the characters and events just take over .

TWO references to Holy Grail? the knights that say 'ni' AND the dreaded beast of AAAARGH? that's greedy

Ron really doesn't get muggle sayings, does he? how funny to have him say 'Snape has it out for you' when he means 'Snape has it in for you', it's a clever way to show how out of touch he is with normal British muggle slang

hehe you should have changed the name Wadjet to male as well, I was giggling like mad as -t is a female suffix [I wondered why you were referring to a goddess as he, and when I found out it was Draco, I sprayed the keyboard with tea]. The male version would be Wadjem or Wad-je [I learned hieroglyphs and some ancient Egyptian purely to write better runes scenes for Harry Potter stories, which is probably an insane reason but there you go. I'm competent in elder Futhark and oghams too]

neat solution

Oh my goodness, Petunia even lied about glasses for children costing anything? I mean, those ugly NHS frames aren't designer frames [if they do designer frames for kids] so the frames would be free as well as the lenses. Harry plainly has no idea about the NHS, but then, if they never took him to doctors, I suppose he wouldn't realise that he's entitled to free treatment at the opticians and dentists too until he's 18.

Fantastic story! Funny, engaging, exciting and a bit tragic in the end. Harry is very young to have to face this kind of consequnceses of his actions, but things like this do happen in real life. When life is crap, all you can do is keep going because it is the only life you have. When reality is horrifying, you still have to face it, because ignoring reality will make it worse. Thank you for writing!

Great set of stories which I enjoyed very much, especially the interactions between Harry and Severus and what you did with Kreacher.

Please say that "A Better Way" is coming soon!

Looking forward to "A Better Way"

Your stories have great potential but it gets lost amongst the bad grammar and spelling errors. Like its "Crucio" not "Crusio".

I'd suggest getting a beta. And also try spacing your chapters better. It would work wonders in improving the overall quality.

That said, great stuff. Will look forward to the sequel.

I'm looking forward to the next one! :D These are always so good for a laugh, despite the serious topics brought in to them.

You have to love Severus. He has a true heart under the I don't care face. I am looking to reading A BETTER WAY.

I'll have to check your reviews because I don't agree with Cedric just randomly being killed like that when you veered so far from cannon. I've also not got a clue who the servant was that gave his hand... It was interesting though. Would also have been interesting to see Severus "play Potter's Damsel in Distress" :-) nice spin on it all being a set up Harry and Severus controlled. That was different.

Lily

Half the tone he actually seems like he could have just and logical reasons for his actions and he's right thinking it insane seeing what Hogwarts allows :-)

Lily