Reviews for Resisting the Past |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story... I think one of the best around here... But there could be an epilogue here, although story looks finished like it is. Andy P.S.: Sorry for duplicate review, forgot to login... |
![]() ![]() Great story... I think one of the best around here... But there could be an epilogue here, although story looks finished like it is. Andy |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story! i'm glad you complete it! do the same for the others please! |
![]() ![]() great story ;) |
![]() ![]() Once again, another great chapter! I am glad to know that Ephram and Amy are back together. |
![]() ![]() aw...yay, a happy ending, those are the best:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mari: Another nicely wrapped up ending. You didn't even have to spell out how Amy knew Ephram was going to be at the airport. It's a given that Misty called Dr. Brown, or maybe even Amy directly (though that might have been one hell of a strange conversation for Amy to have lived through). Misty's character did some hard thinking and her conclusion was a good one: she may love her life but Ephram was only going through the motions in New York. Now he has a chance to be happy. Go go Ephram. Just think, he can start a babysitting service when he and Amy have one of their own...diapers, and bottles, and naps, and tater tots, and katchup - oh my! :) Truly, you are getting into the psychology of these characters. Good practice for when your start writing your own stuff. INN. |
![]() ![]() I DO NOT LIKE MISTY! Please get rid of her for good. |
![]() ![]() Aw...poor Katie. Keep writing:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another Cliffhanger Amy must have been blushing, though... I wish Ephram didn't have to leave with all this pressure... INN. |
![]() ![]() As always, a cute chapter! I cannot wait to read the next one |
![]() ![]() I think that's adorable that Katie attached herself to Ephram. Please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Your muse has really inspired you here! I can't imagine what must have possessed you to write so fast ;) Also, I don't think that 5 is too old for Katie to be... not at all. We don't know when Amy turned 15 her Sophomore year...I was 17 when I started my Freshman year in school...just leave the ages shades of gray and everything will be cool. BTW, I like Misty. INN. |
![]() ![]() I like this, update asap! |