I’m not a huge fan of Sword Art, but you’ve made it interesting with this crossover. I’m looking forward to more! Thanks for writing :)

This is amazing! Thanks for writing!

I think that is too early for that kind of Battle Royale mode, and still haven't finished even 1/4 of the game. Also making some of the Clearers and up-coming Clearers to shy away from the front lines because of that. It's already a Death Game, Almost Everyday to Everyweek Someone dies and that isn't a replenishable numbers.

Oh my god I am loving this so far I can't believe she was looking for Hope. This entire time I thought she was looking for Kirito because she knew him some how. Can't wait to read more.

Did Lightning just kill someone in cold blood?

Never expected Lightning to actually kill someone on purpose. Will there be any reflecting on her actions? Things are bound to get interesting...
Thanks for writing!

...Light, you DO know that you just actually killed someone, right?

it's admireable how you preserve despite the lack of feedback you receive on this fic.
I'm not hooked after the first chapter, though it wasn't bad at all, but I guess I'll read a couple more if for no other reason than to honour your efforts. :)

take care!

Please please please don't kill off Rokel! T.T

You may recognize me from reviewing some FF13 stories of yours. I've recently watched the first two seasons of SAO, and found this story, and it sounded interesting enough to read.

So far, I'm not disappointed. There are no plot holes. The characters have quite "realistic" (non-OOC) reactions. Also, the grammar is a lot better than the other stories of yours. It seems you've improved. I can't say I'm sorry about my reviews that complained about your grammar, because whatever I was reviewing was far worse grammar-wise, but the comments wouldn't really help you now because most of what I "complained" about is good in this recent story. Just a time gap.

Well, I'm only at the third chapter of this so far, but I hope there are some more characters from both settings. It would be disappointing to have just 4 primary characters. The other l'cie and other SAO characters could probably fit in well. But who knows. This is nowhere near the end. There probably are more of them.

Badass lightning saves the day yet again! Btw, where did you get her armor from? I don't recognize the equipment.

Yay an update! Thank you thank you thank you thank you!

I'm glad ya had the idea to write this. The character that died in Lightning's place was very honorable but I'm sad he went down just like that T.T but anyways looking forward to your next chapter -

Quite a few grammar issues, but overall the content has been solid. This is a good crossover for SAO and FF13.

Great job as always! I wonder if Snow will show up eventually...