It's like you're trying to copy fairy tail dragon slayer with the having powerful stuff. How did Naruto get his hands on a shinju fruit and how many does he have that he'd so casually give one to someone who'd probably get torn apart by the sudden power surge of consuming it. You're portraying it as something that anyone can eat and get power instantly. If tsukune eats it and someone like kuyou is still giving him a hard time, that's proof that you're a crappy writer. You made him do the same thing the rikudo sennin did and without consequences. Tsukunes descendants will have chakra and soon enough, chakra will spread around the world, someone will learn how to weaponize it and the ninja wars have begun afresh all because Naruto wanted to help a friend. Your version of Naruto is a short sighted person who does dumb stuff just because he wanted to help a friend while ignoring the consequences of his actions. He used the chidori on saizo while a kaze no yaiba to the spine would have done the trick. I'm not reading this anymore so bye. Make your own work original and don't copy other people's style. You're not kyuubi16, you're fairy tail dragon slayer 2.0

Whens next update

I’m curious, if that’s the third greatest way to die what are the first two?

please update soon

Oh yeah lets just give people chakra like there handouts cause for some reason we still need tsukune and possibily give him kaguya like strength

Lol Cry...of One Thousand should’ve just kept it at Chidori. It doesn’t sound as cheesy reading it.

More please

Great story I really liked it please continue it soon.

She is a QT CINNOMIN BIT! O

YYYYAASSSSSS! O. M G! YUKARI! OH. MY. GOD! I LOVE HER!

One thing that really disturbed me about this series was the fact the group forgave Gin too easily. He tried to RAPE Moka! And they became friends within days of the event. The worst thing is how Moka acts around him. She doesn't act like someone who almost got raped by him. She acts like nothing happened.

like XD

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story..

Well looks like another problem solved, nice chapter

Really enjoying the story's progression. Can't wait for the next chapter.