Pretty good work here. I loved the Blake secretly sneaking a cookie to Zwei and her reading her book behind her history textbook. I liked how you used the quote "You just don't understand my love for Zwei." towards the beginning and at the very end. Overall, pretty nice work here!

This was really good, was a fun read as well.

Blake you can be a huntress with one arm. Please refer to children of summer if you don't believe me.

i love this fan fic its amazing and i love all fan fic posable this one is one of my favorited i love the detail and hard work you put into it like i said i love it i can relate to it alot actually thank you for the amazing fan fic and keep up the good work

Nice feel-good story! It brought a smile to my face.

I see a lot of references to Children of Summer.

I liked the beginning of the story, and disliked the end. I just don't like dogs. There are good dogs, like the incredibly smart ones that also don't destroy everything, but there are more stupid, annoying dogs out there... Zwei is a combination of the two. He's smart and useful, but incredibly annoying. I would tolerate his presence, but do my least to interact with him. Can't favorite this one, but you get a review out of it. Probably not too helpful of a review. The writing is good; I only didn't like some of the content.

This was adorable and heart warming :)

You should send this to rooster teeth see if they reply

*is now laughing due to Blake only having one arm in your other story*

Very well done, in my opinion. You had everyone in character, mostly including Zwei. The only thing that bothered me was how Zwei chewed on Gambol Shroud's sheath rather than, say, a book. Chewing on Gambol Shroud would likely crack his teeth, no? :)

Still an excellent job - kudos!

oh man, dogs, amirite? mine is absolutely adorable. . .10% of the time. the rest she is absolutely a menace to my well-being. chasing after her, cleaning up her accidents before anyone notices while there are people one room over, chasing her through peoples yards. . .did i mention chasing her?

thats a great story, i really like it a lot

D'AW, that was adorable! Loved it.

Wow! This was really good! I absolutely loved it. Great job!

Fluffy and sweet. You captured the characters perfectly.

I think all pets go to heaven.