lovely piece of work! something different. enjoyed reading it. in a way sad it's over. but then again you just got it right not to overdo it. another chapter would've been too much. well done. keep going!

I enjoy the originality of this piece, and the thoughtfulness that you brought towards constructing the rebirth of Princess Serenity in Serena, and what it would look and feel like to have your soul reach out towards a person she had just met. You brought out the complex nature of that as well as made it concrete in sensory language. A refreshing read.

Very well written! Thank you for finishing it!

What a beautiful way to end this story! Loved her speech and his proposal. simply perfect!

Oh I hope the Sailor Senshi are brought back...

why did you delete chapter 14? anyways I'm glade you haven't given up on this story. Can't wait for more.

Love it! Diamond is always a much better bad guy when his powers are kept secret for as long as possible. I'm also hoping maybe you change your mind and the Senshi have been reincarnated or are still surviving and show up.

Can't wait for the final chapter

So excited for whenever the next chapter will come. I just love this story :)

This author is adorable and the story is incredible, just incredibly well developed and paced, and with wonderful imagery. The kind of author that can definitely succeed with getting books published. And this plot is so unique and fun.

is that his golden crystal or serenity's silver crystal. I hope he can stop serena from marrying diamond.

This is amazing. Great story. Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next.

I hope Diamond doesn't kill Endymion and that Endymion marries Serena before Diamond can set his plan.

I hope diamond doesn't win.

You posted the same chapter for chapter 9 and 10