Nice

This was really cute

Ahhh, so cute! I love this storyline and the format.

I love it.

I enjoyed this-fun to see your take on Dawn's childhood and a different history of Spuffy :)

Great story :)

J'aime.

Clever Spike indeed. Changing the end of the season, no dead Buffy! Yeah!

YES.
This story... just YES! Great characterizations, great plot (or great changes to the plot, I guess). Also... more? Please?

I loved it. A bit of a different spin having Dawn really there from season 1 as a six year old. So yeah the memories for the first 6 years of her life were false but really who remembers that far back?! But everything from Sunnydale was real for her she was there and participated.

Hi, I really like your fan fiction. But I have a doubt, why Dawn has six years old when you start your story? Because I think that when she arrived at Sunnydale (at the first season in Buffy's memories) she was suppose to have 10 years old.

I will follow your stories. Bye.

Loved this. :)

Love it.

Great Story! I always liked the big brother/sister relationship between Spike and Dawn, especially because it confused Buffy so much. No one ever saw Spike as anything other than a monster, and Dawn only saw him as a really strong big brother (more or less). Why no one ever noticed how well Spike treated Dawn (and Joyce), is still a puzzle to me. It was nice to read a story that actually showed Buffy evolve into a reasonable person for a change! Really good job! Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.

Dawn was fourteen, not sixteen, when she showed up in season five. This is a decent oneshot.