Decent :) I can tell you have read the books.

I can't see them declaring their love this early on, but this is a nice AU.

Ron has a good idea - swimming!

Interesting start.

How do we know R/Hr never kissed prior to DH? ;)
Beautiful AU so to speak story :)

Do Fred and George have something to do with this? Little push of their baby brother and Hermione? ;)

Strong description of Ron and spot on ;) Hermione we know was drooling ;)

Is this your debut? Nice choice doing what I sense was meant to be a oneshot. I say it is very, very well written. I would have to ask the necessity of breaking this into separate chapters. Oh well. Keep up the good work, ameco mio.