Reviews for Dean's Angel
Lyryenn chapter 12 . 10/26/2017
Good chapter. Can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/4/2015
lying, not lieing
Guest chapter 6 . 11/4/2015
speak, not speck.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/4/2015
meat suit, not meet suite.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/4/2015
stood, not stud. and, not an.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/4/2015
he's, not his.
That1NamedJeska chapter 10 . 12/11/2014
This is AWESOOOOOME! Aside from a few grammatical errors this is waaaay tooooo gooooood. I hope you can update soon!
Rivermoon1970 chapter 9 . 9/25/2014
That was good. Nice job.
The Girl from Badlands chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Aww
My name's Lexie so this makes me happy.
This is sad and sweet, love it.
Raanah chapter 8 . 9/23/2014
This is a really interesting story and I enjoy the layers of emotion. I think you may benefit from having someone read over it and give you feedback, like a beta. I can't comprehend how difficult it must be to be a writer with dyslexia, but I'm here to help if you need me. This is a great story and I would love to read more so I hope you get to post soon!
Rivermoon1970 chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Not a bad start. You can go a couple of ways, if you want a darker tone to your story you could follow the Sam's descent and involvement with Ruby, or you could do a total ret-con of the story. Maybe the next chapter could be a flashback at how Lexie came to live with Bobby and flesh out her character a little bit for us, let us know who she is and how she got into hunting.

And believe me I sympathize with the Dyslexia. I have it and Dyscalculia, it never actually goes away, but the more you write and the more you take in the good and bad criticisms, the better you will get at it. Maybe seek out a beta to help you refine you're writing if you feel comfortable doing that. Don't get discouraged, keep at it.