Nice story but really hoping for Sarah to come back in next sequel/update.

That was intense! o.o Can't wait for the next update :)

Oh my goodness! Is she really dead? I was so excited that you had updated! I love this story! I really hope you can update soon. Thanks!

Pretty please finish the story. I can't wait for the ending. Please hurry

I WANT ABBY AND WILL TO GET TOGETHER SO MUCH IT HURTS
AHHHHHHHH CAN THEY JUST PLEASE GET IT ON ALREADY-

...ahem. Sorry bout that little seizure there. Love your stories, I've read the enitre trilogy of this series! Update!

hehe, so fun :D

Tha's Inerstin'...xD Sorry,couldn't resist..._ Crap! Never mind! Great chapter Will read more.

Hehe, awesome : D

Personally I would just post anyway unless you really really need the Beta response.
Anyway I can't wait for the next update ;)

this is just so funny!

This was great! Can't wait till the next chapter

I wanna read mooooooooorrreeeeeeeeee...

No but seriously this is awesome and I can see you've improved since the first book.

Now I have to play the waiting game.

I've been really wanting to write review for your story but I wanted to wait till I caught up but I'm impatient.

I really, really, really, really, REALLY like this trilogy. A lot. It's paced perfectly and the fact that romance was shoved in your face was a relief too! None of your characters are Mary Sues and they aren't hood ornaments either. Conceptually, you're a pretty solid writer!

While you could use improvement artistically and technically(like descriptions and grammar) you're doing pretty well. And from reading your very first story you've made a lot of improvements with these aspects which is good!

I heard you were looking for a beta reader so I'd volunteer if you're still looking. I'm not very consistent though so agree at your own risk, regardless, I'll be following your story enthusiastically!

Take care and have fun writing! You have such dedication and I'm super jelly :3

I can't wait to read Sarah's reunion with Jack after her revelation that she has feelings for him. I have followed them through the adventures and I think Sarah and Abby should stay. They should stay with Jack and Will. Elizabeth can go off somewhere else... I really like Sarah a lot more of the two. Jack's rescue from the locker hurry...

You should really continue this story its amazing