oh my god, i so love hermione like this

Never get tired of alliteration. It rocks. So does assonance

omg... "I want my mommy", priceless.

I want Draco to have changed her dessert. I guess I'll find out soon lol

This is absolutely hilarious. Go Hermione!"

Hmmm, not sure if I'd like a Ron Sundae. I wouldn't mind a Draco Sundae. With Snape though I wouldn't need the dessert toppings :D

Those limericks are killing me!

love it!

love this story though I always wanted draco and Hermione to be together (really late comment)

OMG! This story was great! I lost track how many times I have laughed out loud in public! This story was so funny and inventive! Even the names you came up with! Seriously funny and twisted and insane and I loved every word! Kudos!

Lol as enjoyable and funny and entertaining as that was, you took like a million years to get there. I could strangle you...

Okay after I realised that Hermione wasn't going to be made the Hogwarts bicycle,I started to enjoy the story. At this point I'm only annoyed that Severus looks like a fool in front of everyone, it's not right.

Haha. Those rhymes were so funny. I am laughing hysterically. I wosh there were more.

This is the best story I've read in ages! It had just the right balance of fluff and smut and made me laugh a lot. I love the Snamione pairing and how you kept the characters how they would he in this situation. The plot was amazing - I loved the potion idea! Maybe the Ron/Dobby was a bit... Freaky, but none the less the story was amazing, and it took me two and a half hours to read it!

I found all the random bits of commentary highly annoying. I had the story great in my head... then would get flustered bc you added commentary. Great story. Just would have been better without all the comments.