Please update this!

Very cool. you should do the birth. I'm sure that you could figure something out. I think you are very talented. :)

Love it. Will you continue it?

Please continue! This is adorable.

It's so obvious that they chuck away that yaknog whilst she's not looking, LOL.

Loved Hiccup's all cheery mood and remarks, hah, I chuckled quite a bit. Wonderful, and again you ended this chapter fantastically, leaves you with a semi-laugh semi-smile on the lips :D

adorable!

Lol oh hiccup u don't know what ur in for. Can't wait to see hormonal astrid!

Your Hiccup and Astrid are just adorable, I can't seem to get enough of them, they're just way too sweet with each other XD They're the kind of couple who are so obviously head over heels in love with each other it almost doesn't need saying.
One of the other things I've been loving about this and your other stories is the characterization in general, you're really good at getting inside their heads and showing us what they're thinking and feeling as well as making them feel completely natural and like themselves.
Keep up the good work :D

Thanks for the update

yay, but hiccup wouldnt hav astrid do that much

*stupid grin* Yay, Hiccstrid bahbehs _ haha :P
Looks like the hormones are hitting poor Astrid pretty hard though :/ If this ever becomes anything more than a one-shot, I look forward to it, but if never becomes anything but this one piece, that's perfectly fine too. I loved this, it was cute, and drama, and sappy, and yeah, I loved it XD

I know you said not to expect it to turn into anything yet, but REALLY
I need to know what happens next!
It's very interesting, this almost dystopian future you have for Hiccup and Astrid (but still realistic and loving) and I want to see how this evolves.

Awe, so sweet. C:

Great story! Can't wait to read more if there is any!

You know, this fanfiction world is so funny in some ways, because everyone wants to write their own versions of all these major milestones, but every time I read yours, I'm like, "alright, that's it. That's exactly perfect" and there is no need to read any other versions or write my own. Just, perfect. :)