I cannot believe it.

The WORST TIME SO FAR for a cut-off and REALLY?!

Thank you for the recent update. I’m glad you are continuing on with this story. I really enjoy the development especially with how Jayfeather feels betrayed by the clan.

Once again, thank you and keep up with the great work. I’ll look forward to the next chapter! Favorited and Followed!

did you start writing this again because of quarantine? lol i was beyond excited to see the notifications for your new chapters! :D

Hia please please please continue this if I knew how to add this story as a favourite then I would also when do you up dage and also will Jayfeather/swingr have kits with Halfmoon.
Lol!

I'm glad everyone uses Berrynose as the cat that antagonizes Jayfeather in whatever situation they're in. I do it, I know a bunch of other writers do it, and it's perfect. Never change, Berrynose, never change. :3

I’m really glad you came back. I was really surprised by the update. You have consistently got me hooked on to this story with each chapter. I really enjoyed the interactions between the Jayfeather and Half Moon along with those from the clan and ancients. I really appreciate the great work. I hope to see more in the future. Followed and favorited!

I already love where this is going. They never touched on this romance in the series as much and I wish that they did. U gotta keep updating bro

Please excuse my language but...

HOLLY SHIT! YES! I remember back in the day (like 5 years ago, woah...) this was my favorite fanfiction, having JayXHalf being my favorite ship. I can’t wait to see what you’ll do with this! YES!

Awe, I wanted Salty Jay to come out about his blindness not allowing him to be that stuff!

Lionblaze and cinderheart seem pretty ooc to me but that made it not awkward so I accept this.

I. WANT. MOOOOOOORRRRREEEEE! HALFMOON, LIONS ROAR, AND DOVES WING COULD LIVE IN THE CLANS, BUT FIRST HALFMOON, LIONS ROAR, AND DOVE WING WOULD AHVE TO GO HOME AND PICK A NEW STONETELLER. THEN COME BACK TO THE CLANS AND LIVE THERE FOREVER. JAYFEATHER COULD STOP BEING MEDICINE CAT AND LEAFPOLL COULD TAKE OVER AND JAYFETAHER AND HALF MOON COULD BE MATES FINALLYM

I hope this isn’t discontinued! I love this!

D'awwww :}

When I first saw this, I was a little unsure, I like Briarfeather better, but this just sparked my interest in Halffeather even more. I know this was written a year or two back, but I hope you come back to it one day.

This isn't bad, but I have noticed a lot of grammatical and spelling errors, which, to me, are kind of distracting.
Maybe just have one or two people look over a chapter before you post it.
Anyway, can't wait until the next update.