Speaking of Naruto and Dragon Age I wanna read a NarutoxDragon Age fanfiction where both Naruko and Fu are dropped in, taken at the age 15 after they both suffer fatal wounds, and instead of using chakra with ninjutsu their memories of ninjutsu are replaced with a chakra-based version of Fate’s magecraft with tracing instead of projection. They’d also have their souls linked so they both know what the other is feeling and where they are. When they wake up upon arrival they’re missing their memories of their life in the elemental nations and have the same aesthetic appearance of grey eyes, hair and deathly pale skin. They’d feel a ‘pull’ towards some hard-to-notice things that happen during the normal storyline and they’d slowly recover their memories and with that their normal colors come back with extra memories of a life of them being having been born as twins in Thaedas up to the point they first wake up.

Loved reading this story!

You made naruto to cocky. Dropping

Would love to see a rewrite of this or a naruto with heroic spirit archer emiya’s power

great work

muito bom

Wow this story is interesting, it's sad that it's just a big plagiat of an another story "Sun'heir, the death guardian"... If you can't wright or don't have idea then don't write, stop copy... I hate you're like

This fic is kinda ruined now. He was doing just fine being in that world by himself. Now you’re forcing an opposition on him. How in the fuck would any non-Uzumaki in the Elemental Nations be able to make a seal that can transport people to different dimensions?

I'm sorry, this is just bad to me. I recognize you don't need my vindication but just wow. I honestly don't see how it got so many favorites. Maybe people just live harems cause i can't stand it myself. This was written and completed years ago so no point in suggestions.

Your harem is ridiculous. I'm not trying to be mean, but your grammar is bad enough without you trying to force these relationships.

You said ten years passed and then said Naruto looked 17. Is that because of his Uzumaki blood? He should be at least 23.

That story was amazing. I am about to start the sequel now Narutos denses is famous and makes good laughs for the road. I hope Apollo will be in pain for a long time. Well til next time

Just finish this and I have to say it on the story telling was meth and the character development and background information was okay. Overall you really need to blend the Elemental nation and Percy Jackson world better because a Shinobi doesn’t charge into another with out finding more information about it. I am also surprised how they just instant know where Naruto are when they are moving across the country.

The authors not at the end of this chapter. We'll see Hera visiting Naruto at the hoover damn, alkng with Hera... u did Hera twice. I know u meant athena but i figured id pojnt it out

Stupid route, why would Artemis give Naruto special treatment? WTF! I'm out!