a blow job in shower LOL

This was amazing! One of the best fics I've reaf, I think.

Thank you so fucking much I can't even express how much I love this. But seriously, thank you.

Oh my hahahahha you gave me nosebleed!

That was really good. I loved Narusasu and especially if it is from Sasuke's POV. I loved how he was so conflicted about his emotions and feelings.

That was really good. I loved Narusasu and especially if it is from Sasuke's POV. I loved how he was so conflicted about his emotions and feelings.

Omg the awkwardness at the end, they're hopeless yet so freaking cute argh! great, great fic!

"Teme, it's called sex and it was invented waaaay before there was even ramen." omfg you killed me, I'm gone to heaven and oh!there's so much gay sex here, I think I'll stay for a while.

Yeah it's me again sorry (and with a account haha) '
I was just wondering if you would do a sequel of this wonderful little story ?

OH - MY -GOODNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !
I HAVE A VIOLENT NOSEBLEED ALL ALONG ! WHAT IS THIS ?! YOUR LEMON IS SO FABULOUS *O* !
At the beginning I was wondering if reading Sasusasu and Narunaru wouldn't feel a bit strange BUT THAT WAS A FUCKING TREAT ! Especially this chapter with Narunaru and Sasuke peeping all of this and getting aroused ! Omg I'm so reading this again !
And the NaruSasu part was one of the best I read in my fujoshi's life ! THEY WERE FAR TOO SEXY *O* ! and Sasuke above all who struggles like hell not to release any sound but can't help it when Naru moves into him ! And the pleasure so intense that makes him loose his mind to the point he can't speak anymore ! and the ''Sasuke so good'' of Naruto lost in pleasure who kisses Sasu like a thing possessed GORGEOUS ! MARVELLOUS !
The fact that the scene was described in sasu POV intensify it because knowing his personnality we are sort of witnessing more how hard it is for him to resist, so when he totally gives in, it's like EXPLOSION OF FEELINGS !
And the final is so f*ckin adorable I can't stop smiling inanely! Naru is just too cuuuute and when he says he loves Sasu, the reaction ''Fuck, oh fuck no" and ''just, just shut up'' was epic !
Sasu you're such a tsundere hahahaha I enjoyed that so much !

In short THANK YOU for this, damn it this fic killed me ! *O*

My nose is TOTALLY bleeding ! OMG I looooved that!
Lemon was GREAT
I've found this fic thanks to Yasuli's tumblr and I can say that improved reverse harem no jutsu version is the best ! *O*

Sasuke you perv ! : P

Yeah well, I for one really appreciate your little hobby. XD

you are amazing and I love you

I loved this omg the clones thing was HOT! Im so glad I found this! It was super hot reading the clone porn omg I loved it lol.

This was the best NaruSasu/SasuNaru fan fiction I have ever read so far. Like everyone else, I do have an imagination, but I still wish this was also in the form of a doujinshi.
Spectacular work!