Could have wished for a longer end but except from that I really liked it.

Great AU. I could see this happening because frankly sometimes John isn't as sensitive to Sherlock's needs as we sometimes accredit him. The entire last season left me very sad for Sherlock. I think he probably feels like he actually did loose his life when he jumped (pretended to jump) to save his friends. I think he lost himself while he was gone destroying Moriarty's web of crime, and came back in pieces hoping that John would be the glue to put him back together - or rebuild him like the six million dollar man. John in my opinion really let Sherlock down and I was a little pist at him for it.

Wow, this is a great story! I only wish you could make it a longer story.
The ending was a bit fast, like, you ended it in one or two paragraphs.
Still a great story by the way, I just think it could be longer if you wanted it to be.

Xx Cheers xX

Your writing is remarkable. A true original piece of writing and in many ways a successor to the Ulysses as one of the finest pieces of writing in history.

This really touched and spoke to me.I liked it so much that I went out and confronted my own issues with Anorexia.
I truly felt at one with Irene because I know exactly what she's going through. Your writing is sublime, I await your next post!
Keep up the good work x

This story is more of a comedy type than a hurt/comfort type to me. Really loved it though. I like how you portrays Irene. Its a bit too fast though but still very good! Love it!

I like differant AU's such as this. They are more powerful than you realise; especially when you realise you are writing about yourself. I hope you keep up the good work.