sorry but the accident with parents and eye is not canon because the accident happened at merasmus' house with the bombnomicon but other then that its good

I hope you continue this fanfic again, it's just really beautiful. The team dynamics are amazing. The dialogue is great. The motives are on point, the characters are just so life-like it's awesome!

Well ofc, they can't just leave the BLU's out in the cold. Even the odds. Man the administrator gives me the creeps. Thank you for writing this story, I hope you keep updating it, I really would love to read more. About how Pyro and Medic and all those guys.

Read all 5 Chapters in one sitting. Love love loveee the plot twist with Pyro and how it was handled. I also really love how you're incorporating the Meet the Team shorts into things and playing with dynamics based on what little information we have about the Merc's relationships with each other. The way you write dialogue is also really great-I can totally hear everyone's voice as I read. (I also love sassy done-with-your-shit Medic too, he is great.) Can't wait to read more!

Pyro, now officially male.

This is literally soooo good! Please upload another chapter!

Dum dum dum... :-P Like the story so far, especially the reference to the meet the medic scene. :-D When's the next one coming? PS I liked and favorited ;-)

I srsly dont know why this fic dosnt have more attention

This story is fantastic! All of the characters are written perfectly can't wait to see what's to come. Update soon!

I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. And not just because of Pyro either!

And you did! Cool.
And Spy would most certainly do that.

Meet the Medic time! I hope to see at least some reference of the many, many conspiracy theories surrounding Pyro. It's kind of odd that the Medic would say he doesn't waste time with eating or sleeping, but also be concerned with everyone's performance regarding health. Eating and sleeping are kinda important. But then it won't be that surprising for Medic to have different standards between his own performance and the rest of the team.

This story was hilarious! The team's dynamics and characters seem spot-on so far.

Wow! Now that's what I call an introduction story. The dialogue was so good that I couldn't resist reading them aloud in the mercs' voices. Except for its grammar errors (perhaps you should find a beta reader to catch those) this story is absolutely flawless. And I love your pacing, too - the chapter flowed very well. Amazing work, my friend! :)

I am seriously addicted to this story.