it was awesome

whoa, plz make more, I can't wait to find out what happens also, WHY WONT YAMI TRUST MARK!? grrr its so frustrating (in a good way XD)

Awwe~~~~

Please write the next chapter the wait is KILLING ME love Darkqueen xxx

This is amazing and I love it.
Please continue soon.
-Time-

plz update! this is such a great story!

Oh, apologies for the double review... but I did find something that reminded me very much of your work:
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Reading through this fic over the course of three nights, I can't tell you how much it means to me. Lots of the content is very relatable, and even as a guest reader I feel somehow very emotionally involved with it. I really admire how you describe the self-harming portion in a mature, emotional kind of way. I also admire your writing style, it's very descriptive but not overly so. And the romance portion is very gradual. I love how you don't just jump right into it without any buildup and let the readers really immerse themselves in the plot first. All in all, it's just a lovely writing, and I will be keeping a close eye on it. :)

Please continue this you are doing so well even I can't hold a story form more than 4 chapters! And this is so well written as well!

~Sun and Moon~

WHEN IS NEXT CHAPTER?! SO GOOD!

I would totally would love to know what happens next. Plz write more.

Hiya! I just wanted to say I love this story and I hope you continue to update it for a long time! Thank you

Great story and a very emotional story as well.
It makes me want to cry.
Loved it keep doing story's like it :);)

Man, this is awesome! I'm looking forward to future chapters, so update soon! Never stop writing, my friend!

Please make the next chapter and the one after that I really want to know what Happens to Yamimash and Mark! Thank you _