Please keep writing your so good! I love the story

I sped through this entire story because I couldn’t put it down. the plot line is original and like nothing I’ve ever read before. I like the slowly developing relationship between Maka and Soul. It would be interesting to see what happens with Kid later on. I’m terribly sorry that people have been harassing you on this site. I’ve never had that happen to me but I’m positive it doesn’t feel very good. Whether you continue this story or not, I most humbly thank you for writing this for all of us to read. I enjoyed your story immensely.

I don't understand why people with send death threats and call you fat or whatever... it's pointless. Probably because they are not able to write such and amazing story as you! I started reading this today and finished it all because I couldn't put it down! I don't know if you'll update this, but if you do I'll be waiting!

I was laughing my ass off! Absolutely amazing! BlackStar and Soul are hilarious so is Maka!

I wish I had encountered your story sooner, so that maybe one more review could have alleviated the strain of unkind reviews. I do like this story despite my differences in opinion on the characters. While this seems like it may not be a desirable ending, if you chose to leave of here, the story would not suffer from it. I wish you success in your future endeavours.

Wow awesome! Please continue!

Well done! Grammatically this chapter was strong the story is coming along great. Can't wait to see what happens and what couldn't made Kidd work for the witches.

I am in love with this story!

Wow this is a great fan fic!plz write more!

Omfg...Wow...Amazing! PROBABLY THE BEST FAN FIC I HAVE EVER READ! AWESOME! PLZ WRITE MORE! Please make Maka okay! What the fuck is Soul gonna do!? AMAZING!

I'm enjoying the story. The grammar is a little inconsistent but I'm hooked with the story.

I really love this story youve definatly taken a different route by using the witch possessing maka. And i love the fallout between soul and maka this is super well done and i cant wait to see more! I think my only complaint ia you dont urilize kidd as much as you can. I think he couldve been used alot more and used as a good wedge between them the pacing is a bit quick but its still really good :D i honestly cannot wait for a new chapter :)

Beautiful! Plz write more of this magnificent fan fic ! It is truly awesome!

Ohhhhhh this is really interesting ! And yeeeessssss they kissed ! Awesome ! Plz write more of this amazing fan fic!

Wow amazing story so far plz update so that I can continue! And make sure u add more kisses and add more Kidd!