Good chapter. I actually went onto YouTube and watched that scene... the kid playing Young Snow White was sort to say UGLY. Plain and simple she ugly and she looked uglier when she was crying

Es la segunda vez que lo leo y aun me encanta

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH OMG I CANT EVEN I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I'm going crazy going back and forth jumping from fandom to fandom for stories you've written and I probably dont make much sense anymore but just know that I love basically everything you write xD

Great Chapter!

Peter Pan is one of my favourite villains in OUAT and this paragraph just made me think of what a dark couple those two would be. How much chaos and havoc they would cause even as just best friends or ally’s and not lovers.

‘She stepped back, allowing the entirety of the mob she'd created to enclose on the man, surround him completely, and grinned darkly as she listened to his screams be drowned out by her music as she played louder, making the magic stronger, making it inescapable. She closed her eyes for a moment, knowing she wouldn't be able to see what was happening, but imagining the expressions on the townspeople's faces when they woke the next morning to see what they'd done...and not remember a single detail of it.’

I will admit that I had thought of a story where instead of Rumple she ends up with Peter (obviously different timeline and such) but I can’t write and I see things as movies. Love the story!

update

The last bit, almost like she was talking about the weather especially when she changed the subject

Great story, you really made me feel for Piper a couple of times in this story and I really like how she and Rumplestiltskin compliment each other and feed into each others darkness, is refreshing.

I SO WISH THE TV SHOW WAS LIKE THESE BOOK SLIDE OMG U LOVE IT

THAT'S MY GIRL *WHOLE HUGE CROWD OF PEOPLE CLAPPING* GIRL GOT GAME BOIII

I'd...like to possibly...use your legend of Sirens of the Sea and half-sirens for an RP of mine if possible?Just for the race itself

The thing about this is you have to correctly do S4 when you do it, obviously at the time of writing this you couldnt have known, but with Rumple able to turn him back to August in the show, youd have to come up with a diffrent plot when that bit comes up.

I agree as well. People can only change if they themselves want to.

You can't really force someone to change unless they want to, especially when they are happy with how they're.

for season for I can see belle getting ahold of the dagger and forcing rummy from town, then piper would go with him or somethi

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
*sound of my heart shattering into a million pieces*
I am actually crying right now ohmygod
I thought it would be different-
but not like this. Never like this. This is infinitely more painful.
*sobs forever*
(I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks Blue is shady. Something is up with her and I don't think it's pretty.)

I love these two so much! The family fluff is killing me XD